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Post by Paul Hanni on Jul 30, 2010 3:11:06 GMT -5
Bodies In My Bed (a.k.a SLUT) - lyrics
Put on a raincoat to keep the sun inside This feels like a rainbow in the back of my mind These old wounds are open and they won't heal in time This is mine All mine This is mine All mine
Don't be so selfish that your dreams all go Right out the window if I tell you so And though you can hear me don't pretend you know This is mine All mine This is mine All mine
Oh I won't let that sun go down Spread myself all around this town I keep a thought of you in my head
I will share the fire, but not the flame Come to me when I call your name All these bodies in my bed (repeat)
Still have the puzzle, but not the pieces All of these photos with their scratches and creases A voice over the phone, we talk of yesterday Everything's fine Oh but you know that I lie
This skin is dirty It's been overused So I paint over my honesty and it looks brand new
Never thought I'd see the likes of you 'round here 'round here
Oh And I won't let that sun go down Spread myself all around this town I keep of thought of you in my head
I will share the fire, but not the flame Come to me when I call your name All these bodies in my bed (repeat)
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Post by carlinla on Aug 4, 2010 1:29:02 GMT -5
Hi Paul Finally got registered. OK here is my take on a couple of lines I think the last lines of final verse are down here round here first verse kill in time = heal in time ?? But then I thought 'elbows' were 'old wounds' (admittedly making only slightly more sense) I hear can not can't in: 'And though you can't hear me don't pretend you know' 'People I follow you in my head' 'All these bodies in my bed' ... I couldn't get these clearly, you have a better ear than I Gunga Din and I think you nailed it! I'd like to get these right. This is not G rated song LOL but I detect some sly irony here too. I really like the vibe and movement of the song and its a lotta music coming from a vocalist acoustic guitar and a baseman. Very nice, hope we can get a cut of this w/o the crowd noise. C'mon E19 let Crystal be Crystal , we can take it!
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Post by Paul Hanni on Aug 4, 2010 2:27:19 GMT -5
Hi carlinla!
I took a few of your lyric changes, but the others still seemed right to me. Hopefully I can get Crystal to confirm or fix some of these, but I think with these changes I'd say the lyrics are pretty accurate at this point. Thanks for the input. It's a great song and I'd love to hear it without the chatter in the background.
Thanks!
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carlh
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Post by carlh on Aug 4, 2010 17:38:06 GMT -5
Paul, There is one more. I think that: 'If all of these photos with their scratches increases' is actually: 'If all of these photos with their scratches and creases' in singing the ending d on the 'and' is lost. Try it carl
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Post by Paul Hanni on Aug 5, 2010 8:41:57 GMT -5
Paul, There is one more. I think that: 'If all of these photos with their scratches increases' is actually: 'If all of these photos with their scratches and creases' in singing the ending d on the 'and' is lost. Try it carl Thanks carl, I changed it and also removed the If. I think it's right now.
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Post by Paul Hanni on Mar 12, 2013 8:58:32 GMT -5
updated lyrics now that the song has been released.
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