Hi Paul Finally got registered. OK here is my take on a couple of lines
I think the last lines of final verse are down here round here
first verse kill in time = heal in time ?? But then I thought 'elbows' were 'old wounds' (admittedly making only slightly more sense)
I hear can not can't in: 'And though you can't hear me don't pretend you know'
'People I follow you in my head' 'All these bodies in my bed' ... I couldn't get these clearly, you have a better ear than I Gunga Din and I think you nailed it!
I'd like to get these right. This is not G rated song LOL but I detect some sly irony here too. I really like the vibe and movement of the song and its a lotta music coming from a vocalist acoustic guitar and a baseman. Very nice, hope we can get a cut of this w/o the crowd noise. C'mon E19 let Crystal be Crystal , we can take it!
I took a few of your lyric changes, but the others still seemed right to me. Hopefully I can get Crystal to confirm or fix some of these, but I think with these changes I'd say the lyrics are pretty accurate at this point. Thanks for the input. It's a great song and I'd love to hear it without the chatter in the background.